Public audit · last reviewed 10 May 2026
What an earlier draft of the proposal got wrong, and what we now say.
A public, sourced cross-walk of every load-bearing issue in the original
Bottom Pub proposal and how the rework treats it. Each row names what changed,
classifies the severity (Critical / Significant / Material),
and links to the briefing that carries the detail. The full reference list is in
the project repository at docs/research/citations.md.
Liquor licensing & regulatory pathway
Earlier draft assumed the co-op would simply hold the licence the way any operator does.
What we say now The Liquor Licensing Act 1990 (Tas) s.22 requires a licensee to be a natural person; a body corporate cannot hold the licence. The lawful structure is the co-op owns the assets and a publican holds the licence personally, with a written agreement preserving the licensee's statutory duty of effective control under s.46.
Earlier draft did not address the licensing-scrutiny implications of a 9-person volunteer board.
What we say now Under s.3A and s.22(1A) of the Act, every board member is an "associate" of the licensee and is subject to the Commissioner for Licensing's fit-and-proper test, including police checks. This is a real constraint on director recruitment, not a footnote.
Earlier draft did not engage the operational mechanics of obtaining a licence.
What we say now Under s.23(4) the application must be advertised; the 14-day representation window is the only point of community input. Special Permits under s.31 can cover opening events before a full general licence is in force. Fees, RSA training for all staff, and Food Safety Supervisor obligations are real recurring costs.
Co-op legal structure & governance
Earlier draft proposed 5% dividends to investors, capital return at Year 15, and surplus to community projects.
What we say now Under the CNL (applied in Tasmania via the Co-operatives National Law (Tasmania) Act 2015, which applies the CNL set out in the Appendix to the NSW host Act): a Distributing co-op may pay limited returns and must have a Disclosure Statement before raising capital; a Non-Distributing co-op cannot pay returns at all. The two structures are mutually exclusive. The choice has to be made; the original draft straddled both.
Earlier draft proposed 2 of 9 board seats reserved for "Investor Members".
What we say now CNL s.228(1): "the right to vote attaches to membership and not shareholding." Reserving seats by capital is exactly the structural feature s.228(1) prohibits. The Registrar will not approve rules that breach the principle.
Earlier draft implied anyone who paid a joining fee got a permanent vote.
What we say now CNL s.156 requires cancellation of inactive members. The active-membership rule must satisfy the BCCM SMART criteria — Simple, Measurable, Actionable, Reasonable, Timely. A vague "supporters" rule won't pass the Registrar.
Earlier draft proposed circles, double-linking, multi-stakeholder consent governance with worker-members alongside community-members.
What we say now Sociocracy works in mature multi-site organisations. For a pre-trading rural pub it risks decision latency and administrative paralysis. Replaced with: a small elected board (5–9 members), a clear board-vs-management split, a professional General Manager, and non-voting advisory committees for specialist questions.
Financial claims & ASIC exposure
Earlier draft promised 5% annual dividends, 75% return over 15 years, capital returned in Year 15, secured by a first mortgage over the property.
What we say now Each is a regulated financial offer under the Corporations Act 2001. Public debenture offers require a prospectus and a trustee under Chapter 6D; "promising to repay money" is the s.9 definition of a debenture. Marketing such an offer publicly without a registered disclosure document is the textbook ASIC enforcement scenario.
Earlier draft promised Year-5 surplus split 40% reinvest / 30% community grants / 20% rebates, plus a 25-year vision of philanthropy and scholarships.
What we say now Hospitality margins are tight; survival is the only goal in years 1–3. CNL constrains how surplus can be distributed. Surplus-treatment policy is a board-and-member decision after audited results, not a marketing line at Stage 1.
Earlier draft did not separate mutual (member) trading from non-mutual (non-member) trading.
What we say now Australian co-op tax under the mutuality principle treats member-trading surplus differently from non-member trading. The point-of-sale system has to track member-vs-non-member transactions; the accountant has to run the separation through every BAS. A real cost the model has to carry.
Earlier draft omitted public liability for licensed premises, WorkCover Tas premiums, D&O insurance, RSA for every staff member, Food Safety Supervisor, music licensing, food-premises registration, annual liquor-licence fees.
What we say now Each is a real recurring cost. In aggregate they're material. A feasibility budget that omits them isn't a feasibility budget.
Heritage, building, & planning
Earlier draft did not engage the legal regime that applies to a Tasmanian Heritage Register listed place.
What we say now Part 6 of the Historic Cultural Heritage Act 1995 (Tas) prohibits any "works" to a registered place without Heritage Council approval — Minor Works Approval or Discretionary Permit. This applies to internal as well as external works that affect significant fabric. It changes feasibility budgeting fundamentally.
Earlier draft did not budget the change-of-use upgrades (fire safety, DDA, Food Standard 3.2.3 kitchen fit-out) on a heritage-listed building.
What we say now On a registered place, fire egress, accessibility ramps, kitchen ventilation, and impervious flooring all have to be designed not to alter significant fabric — sequenced through dual approval (Heritage Council and Huon Valley Council). A heritage architect, a BCA/DDA compliance surveyor, and structural engineering are real line items.
Operating-model assumptions & case-study evidence
Earlier draft leaned on volunteer working bees and "community labor" as part of the operating model.
What we say now Working bees, opening events, ad-hoc community-asset maintenance — fine. Operational shifts substituting paid roles is a Fair Work Act 2009 risk; ss.357–359 sham-contracting penalties apply; volunteers are not covered by the Workers Rehabilitation and Compensation Act 1988 (Tas) for commercial-grade work. Working bees stay working bees; operational shifts are paid shifts.
Earlier draft said the pub "can never be sold or stripped for profit" and would "belong to Cygnet, forever."
What we say now A non-distributing co-op's asset lock is real but not absolute; co-ops can be wound up under specific procedures. Supermajority dissolution thresholds and community-purpose successor clauses are designed safeguards, not eternity. The honest commitment: the rules can be drafted to make selling out very hard, on community terms — not "forever".
Earlier draft specified GM $85k–$95k, assistant $70k–$80k, licensee $65k, accommodation $310k Year 3, Year 5 surplus $80k.
What we say now Those numbers were not modelled. They have been removed. A real operating model is built against the Hospitality Industry (General) Award 2020 (MA000009), Tourism Tasmania ADR/RevPAR benchmarks for the Huon-Far South region, and ATO small-business benchmarks for the pub/tavern industry — not invented at a meeting.
Earlier draft cited Mondragón, The Old Crown, and other community-ownership stories as if they mapped onto a Tasmanian village pub.
What we say now Mondragón is a multi-billion-euro Spanish industrial federation. The Old Crown's situation differs from ours in scale, jurisdiction, and trading history. Each cited case has been verified or removed; the working ledger is in the Document vault.
Property status
Earlier framing implied a path to community ownership without engaging the actual ownership status of the property.
What we say now The Commercial Hotel is privately owned. As of writing it is not publicly listed for sale; there is no insolvency, receiver, or mortgagee-sale process. Huon News reported on 19 September 2024 a $250,000 structural restoration was underway under owner James Goulding. Any community-ownership conversation has to follow the owner's lead, not pressure or dictate.
Methodology
The audit was built from a corpus of nearly 1,000 sources collected via 18 NotebookLM
deep-research tasks against the project's bpga notebook. Each row above
is sourced via the briefing it links to. Highest-stakes URLs (legislation,
ASIC regulatory guides, Heritage Tasmania, the Huon News article on the
restoration) have been independently verified via direct fetch on the retrieval
date stamped at the top of this page. Where a URL surfaced by NotebookLM did not
verify, the underlying claim was either dropped or restated without it. Internal
project documents are labelled "internal project research" and never cited
as if they were external authority.
Severity scale, locked here so it's consistent across the matrix: Critical — exposes the project to ASIC enforcement, criminal liability, or invalidates the legal structure. Significant — structurally compromises the proposal or contradicts a core co-op principle, but is not in itself unlawful. Material — overclaim, false precision, or unverified assumption that would mislead a reader without legal risk per se.